Giver of love -true story draft may have error

Giver was born to be poor and her father was very selfish man. They lived in shacks most of her childhood. When it was cold she took old tattered blankets to fill the gaps to fill some warmth. In the summer she go to the swimming hole near by to keep her cool. Most of the time she worked very hard washing clothes with  rub board and steel basin. Line dry them both summer and winter her hands all chapped. Giver loved school so much for it was so warm and they had a hot lunch. One time hungry she walk home from school near the local diner and saw her father eating diner of roasted potatoes and meatloaf and beans with biscuit. She wander wahy he was like this . She vowed when she got older to be not like him.
As she graduated and git married she wanted the best life and hope for a great family. Her father in law she tried to love. Giver made him dinner and supper and also breakfast. She clean his giant house while his two daughters did nothing at all to help. Giver wanting him to accept her but he would not. Finally her husband and Giver moved back where her dad lived. Husband wanted a certain job but could not find it and giver already had two kids by now and Husband still wanted the job that he went to school for. Than Giver had a third child and Husband blamed giver for him not getting the job he wanted. So husband started to drink heavily  . He became mean. Giver did all she could for her kids paid the bills and fed her babies. Husband wanted beer and no money was left and he was mad. Giver kicked him out. She remember what her dad did to her so her babies came first so she got a divorce. Giver got a job ,but had no car she walk in the rain and snow she sacrifice everything for her kids. Her Ex never knew if he pay child support. The kids grew up and left home one after the other. She had her hands full but she made it and finally got her own car, Giver today still gives to her neighbors you might see her pet a cat and call it Buddy. She gives to her neighbor not only present but her time and her love. Giver gives to her children her love and time and helps them when they need her. She  the giver is the most precious person I ever met and my personal hero. I do not know what to do without Giver my mom I love You

Autumn

The Tree came to life one spring day as the leaves cried for joy- budding onto his branches while the wind calmly flew by.  As each leaf grew the tree move his truck so cause leaves complain," We need more sunlight!"
When it started to rain very hard to the point lighten stuck a branch the leaves cried, " Tree soak up the water we broke an arm!" The Tree soak all it could, but the branch never grew back. It got very hot  and the bugs started eating the leaves and it seem like never ending cries of agony," Help Tree they eating us alive save me!!!!!" Finally a cool wind blew end and one leaf said this," Goodbye dear Tree my life has come to and and I have turn all gold." He fell with the wind with other leaves that autumn day. For Tree he was so happy," Finally some peace and quite."

Cloud

Cloud came out after being bullied by Storm all day. With all his lighten and thunder all he was to Cloud and to Sun was the biggest Bully ever. You have to admit with his tornadoes reaching havoc on what could of being a pretty day just made them hate storm. Well one day storm had not appeared  for a while and Cloud and Sun were happy. Rainbow was not happy and she soon disappeared -living Cloud really Sad.           Cloud look down at the house below and saw Grass and it was all turning brown and Flower had actually drooped to the sides. The birds look at Creek below but Creek was sadden for he could not give them a drink.
Cloud look up at Sun and said,"Maybe we had Storm all wrong we have cause so much heat that all has dried up. At least Storm brings water to make things grow!" Sun replied," It seems that we can be bullies as well to the Grass, to  the Flower, and to the Creek maybe we are wrong?"
Storm finally showed and gave rain to all and every one was happy-even Cloud and Sun. Rainbow appear with array of colors saying," We are to work together cause we are family so quit this bully nonsense and just
 keep making rainbows instead."
Cloud like that Idea and so did Sun and the others. Storm knew the truth though the biggest bully ever neither any of them of knew it was Ozone -he made everything hotter and made Storm look bad with all those nasty storms that rolled by. Every day he plotted another way to even to make Cloud look bad. That has not happen yet for him , but Cloud  down town was turned into a bunny so Cloud here was next and Sun most know and Rainbow most know. Cloud so naive in his own world that he does not know what will happen next.

Rayne

Rayne loves when  the thunder comes down to her and the lighten flashes its fury as water pours down her pale cheeks. She wears only black silk dress as it touches her skin all soaked. She drags her self into the muddied yard as the rain turn more violent and gushes onto her her black soaked hair. Her green eyes open toward the sky and she smiles . She keeps on walking till she reaches the swamp  filled with frogs leaping with delight and seeing the fish swim so freely till it gets eaten by a gator near by. She finally makes makes it home to her porch to listen to rain to cease. Swinging on her porch swing all muddy and wet. Her mother comes out side to see her daughter all wet and dirty that scolds her and makes her take a hot bath. The next day Rayne has gotten a bad cold. The gator still waits hoping she will  return cause he never got his dessert!